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Natural · 12-31-2013, 06:17 PM

This was good. This is a good switch up of style for you.
I really didn't see any old habits or patterns from you in this.
The scheme was dope too. Perhaps a little lacking on the witt/creative side if I wanted to nitpick
But then again I don't really think that is what you were aiming for with this.
I'm not sure if you took my advice and are trying to form a new steeze or if it is mere coincidence
But either way good writing. I still don't get why you structure ya stuff this way though...
But I guess if it floats your boat that's what matters.

Edit: Are you writing to a beat? That would explain the structure...
Just thought of that. Not sure if that's the case though.

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12-31-2013, 06:17 PM	#2
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	This was good. This is a good switch up of style for you. I really didn't see any old habits or patterns from you in this. The scheme was dope too. Perhaps a little lacking on the witt/creative side if I wanted to nitpick But then again I don't really think that is what you were aiming for with this. I'm not sure if you took my advice and are trying to form a new steeze or if it is mere coincidence But either way good writing. I still don't get why you structure ya stuff this way though... But I guess if it floats your boat that's what matters. Edit: Are you writing to a beat? That would explain the structure... Just thought of that. Not sure if that's the case though. 1 Last edited by Natural; 12-31-2013 at 07:29 PM.