Quote:
Originally Posted by Split
Will supply details after I get back from a liquor run (been a long ass weekend) but I thought Camp Bell was rockier with his scheming and flow but Genocide awkwardly dropped his metaphor after a few lines, just a first impression, not casting my vote quite yet
|
yeah. Genocide had an interesting beginning that was also leading somewhere probably dope with the topic but lost it... like the building bit, in the intro, like it was smoove as fuck and then kinda fizzled out and became a story about a d00d who fucks up and then life gets em w0w
camp.
explanation at the end was whack as fuck. js. any7ways the writing wasnt as lazy as i thought it was, it just flowed really easy, it was like too natural idk i just like complexity. the idea that your mind makes up memories just to lose them is true, then add that to the realization that it changes us in ways we dont know how and i liked your verse. trapped by the waste products of his imagination
v/ camp good battle folks