[Split]

zygote.
this was on par for certain. the opening three lines were heavy. it sort of slid into imagery, is my only complaint. i see the connect w/ the topic.




cdm. damn dog why don't you flow like that all the time.

And man wants to live like GOD is asleep, weep, gnash teeth, AND THEN REGRET?
When I tried to tell you GOD is awake and sin is death, death in every breath that’s left?


coo

but i still feel like your verse is choppy.. just linking it all up from bar to bar/ scheme to scheme/ concept to concept, felt more like a presentation than a declaration if that makes sense

it's probably because you develop arguments by asking questions.


v/ Veritas, think that he ended stronger and kept more directed throughout his verse. both battlers seemed to be diving into point by point depictions of the theme as a cautionary whole and i liked his delivery better. kind of stupid at times, but that doesnt really matter, its not the argument its how you present it this week. imo.