Thanks a lot for the great feedback all. Appreciate it a lot!
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Vulgar: Hahaha, the fins are annoying as fuck 80% of the time, no offense taken though. I'm norwegian. Word about the fact that rhymes should be secondary, I've focused a lot on the rhymes lately as the issues with my writtens are often reversed. Some of my older works is examples of that. Thanks a lot for dropping some words on this, going to try to focus more on keeping it up in both aspects on my next drops.
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