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Old 01-22-2013, 06:07 PM   #3
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They say nation building but that's just sheilding the truth
We just committed mass murder without wieldin a clue

All my life I been told that this road is tough
And you gotta keep on walkin till you're soles get rough
But lately I don't know how I'm even holding up
Can't get no education because I'm broke as fuck


those were the lines i found to be most enjoyable.

had a good overall piece here, some slacking in a few lines as far as falling off flow wise. think your message still came through clearly though, good drop. keep posting and staying active!
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