zenland - solid drop. good mechanics. good take on the concept. read like a tongue twister in spots. which was cool.
frank- extremely creative idea. and very well executed. I got sick of it quick though. it got repetitive. I just wish you wrote half the verse like that and the other half in your normal style. iono.
overall- franks extremely awesome concept against zens short but well flowing verse. zen if you wrote more I would have given it to you but it felt underwhelming because of the briefness of it. frank your concept wins the day.
vote-frank
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