[Witty]

I think you posted these before?

Anyway, I thought they were dope....rhymes were cool, it flowed for the most part and your word choice was strong.

I'm not really sure what standards other people have, but all I look for is a piece that makes sense, rhymes well, and gives me something to think about...and this did.

Not mind blowingly awesome...but definitely not wack, it was very short and you didn't go into too much detail as to what you were referring to, but it is solid writing.