I'm happy to have you back. The opening segment was an immaculate example of your style, while the Untitled cypher part was very good. I initially was thrown off by "fonts" not having the hard O, but when I realized what you did, it worked. I loved the first six lines. The rest was good, though "Mineral sediments is how much you rockin" was clunkier than the rest simply because it didn't make sense.
(And I typed this so quickly because I'd read the cypher part already.)
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