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Old 12-24-2013, 12:50 AM   #20
Certain
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In quiet thought, he made headwind on a camel to the sounds of his brethren's chants
Each night he dreamt of the torrid desert sands,
and a swarm of locusts that formed a helping hand
Some honeycombs are made of hexagrams - onlookers admire its odd beauty
There's a difference between staying alert and being an ant in a food cabinet on guard duty
I've seen wraiths of men guzzle freeze-dried karma from an enemy's spine
The "Do It Yourself" ideology seems to breed poignancy through a century's time
but even the leaf hoisting insect might prefer an assembly line
Vulgar spent all season trying out different methods of storytelling, but when he finally got his title shot, he returned to his most comfortable and most dominant form. Here he dissects man's true independence in the mold of Aesop Rock, thick with metaphors while using anecdotes and allegories to come to a conclusion. This verse wins the prize for the densest of the season, loaded with important thoughts conveyed with eloquence and wit. He even cut down on the absurd references to make this verse slightly more digestable. PancakeBrah no-showed.
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