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Old 03-03-2013, 01:20 PM   #14
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Pretty one sided, I don't feel a full breakdown is necessary. Grave, you use a lot of pointless shit in your lines, that doesn't make sense with what you're trying to get across. I used to do the same thing. Keep it concise, and get as much across in as little words as possible. Dom had consistency, didn't need much to take it but still had a pretty decent verse. Had some cool wp's and used them effectively.

DOMINATE takes it pretty easily.
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