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Old 12-23-2013, 09:10 PM   #8
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They descended with purpose, perfected entities asserting dense
Molecular murmurs, sure disturbance to our Earth as it rests in its purest
Convection is what stirred the very vessel they herded, we heard that
They were the messages, their words will be dissected to be learned
They weren't expected but emerged in a blaze, the scene was gorgeous
They became the leading forces and our deities of worship
Great openener.

Make superior exalted kin, nostalgia for the ages, It's the call to cages
Homage paid to Amadeus, faulted, faded malt, decay of falling angels............
Saw the rising of the seas and all the slaughtered lives uprooted
As they're lying with our wives beneath us thriving in the lost Bermuda
Fire.

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Endearment to our daughters 'till their fathering the cradle
Make superior exalted kin, nostalgia for the ages, It's the call to cages
Was this a reference to Genesis where the sons of God gain permission from God to sleep with the daughters of men? Great line.

I haven't read the book of Enoch personally, but I've always had a fascination with angels. I have read the Revelations, though. So yeah, this was an interesting read, and your interpretation of events a joy to engage in. Lots of excellent imagery. Good job on the multis and the interesting rhyme scheme. The overall tone of this piece was informative, yet compelling. Great read, mate. Look forward to more from you.
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