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Old 12-22-2013, 11:44 PM   #14
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lol @ Pancake's feedback. He's partially on the ball concerning the obvious vocabulary flags. I haven't heard of most of these words which was a breath of fresh air. It reminds me that I need to read more books.

i'm a regolith cloak over a core of limestone; brass - polished, gleam.
^Good line. I like the word 'regolith' and will attempt to add it to my arsenal.

sip on a singapore sling while my tongue cradles excellence
an age-old testament. Strelitzia in the Saraha - a state of ecesis.
^You've been reading the Smithsonian lately, haven't you?

ghostly gimp. before this cold & lonely vent,
i hope she inhales the holy scent of an Old Etonian
^Cool flow.

Keep your nose in the dictionary, friend. Although not too long; you might develop ink-tholosis. Yes, I made that word up, and like a rookie I used a dash.

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