[Mike Wrecka]

very tough vote here. im gonna do a quickie and get it over with guys sorry

vulgar - it flowed better than your usual stuff. the flow was next next level. thats two levels up. the metaphors were beautiful . i really liked the piece. one of my favorites ive read from you this season BUT i dont like how you tackled the topic. you really didnt tie in the picture at all in my eyes. and thats huge minus points.

diode - the writing was basic and the flow was average at best. but you took the picture and ran with it. i think the twist at the end has been done to death BUT i honestly didnt see it coming. so kudos brother. that helped you tremendously imo. i like that you gave each of the male characters a name but not the chick. good choice.


overall- its a much better written piece that didnt hit the topic head on vs a mediocre written piece that took the topic by the horns and created a story with it. im going diode. he used what he was given imo. vulgar great verse. it just grazed the surface of the topic though and this is a topical league. more of an OM imo. drop it there and ill give more in depth feed.


vote - diode