Ok this was nice, two different styles.....
Zenland came out with something quite riveting i must say. A bit short, but enough to get the message across and that's the way to go...short, concise but enough to give a lasting impression.
Frank had something very interesting, a risk but worth it. At times when you go with this type of stuff it can come across as repetitive, actually usually it does but in this case I thought it worked well in Frank's favour. The thing I liked about his piece was the ironic twists that he exposed in the lines
Ugh, hard choice here but I gotta give this to Frank, its just the overall effect his verse had on me that won him this one
v/ Frank
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