Thank you for all the feed...Just write hit it on the head by it being an overwordy braggadocio piece....the key was in the last line but then I had to make a response...but I will drop a vocabless verse...My style exploits rhythm in words and how it rolls off the tongue...some lines are singular, some line are run ons...then mix of quads and sometimes I throw in reverses....wait..saying too much...lol
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