Tyson - damn nicely written verse here man, top notch rhyme scheme and i definitely felt the approach you took with your piece. It was well executed and a nice take on the concept/topic.
Red - Ok, I appreciate your approach on this man but really I thought it didn't really do it for me. It was a good attempt but it didn't come across as that creative to me, and to put it straight i just wasn't feeling the structure and execution
Tyson gets my vote here for having a superior verse
v/ Tyson
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