I think it's good that you have a wide vocabulary...and I think it's good exercise to rhyme them....but
When it comes down to it at the end of the day nobody speaks like this
Its unnatural to most because of that. Instead of posting an entire piece of big vocabulary words I think it would be better if you allowed you're wide vocabulary to compliment you're piece rather than take it over.
Let you're wide vocabulary be a tool and not you're entire arsenal.
I've read you're drops many times....I think you are a dope writer....
That has the potential to break boundarys.....but you've got to branch out from vocabulary being you're main emphasis point.
Overall this wasn't bad.....good vocab....good scheming....just too much vocab
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