sick battle. i am proud of both of you dudes. quickie vote. i read both verses thoroughly, just gonna drop a vote without going to in depth. my apologies.
frank - classic frank verse. flow was godly. had that usual from you unexpected rhyme pattern. never knew when or where the next rhyme was coming from but every time it hits it works eloquently. the story was good. not mind blowing. but it was an emotional tale. and i felt some of the emotion coming through the screen pretty hard. really enjoyed the verse.
certain - this was good. very strong verse here. i think your verse against frank last time may have been better though. i really liked the topic though. it was a good approach and it painted a wonderful backdrop for the personal drama that the woman was experiencing. adding the would be father was a very good idea. helped tremendously.
overall- certain had the more innovative story. frank had the much better flow imo. not that certains was bad, it wasnt, it was excellent but franks was just beauty in motion. frank brought out more emotion from me. tough vote. ummm im going with frank here. on a simple level, i just liked his more. i think it was slightly better written .
vote - frank
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