[Adonis]

V - I like the topic, liked the flow or at alteast. Most of it. You had some good lines, but in all honesty the vverse sort of dragged on for me. I got the jist of the verse early on and you didn't change direction at all, just kept marching.

D- mmmmm, I don't knnow myy man. In the midle youu hit har with solid writing/descripption in painting a piicture of the vixen. Other than that short stanza the entire rse was stanndard. There was nothing that stood out, not topicc/concept , flow....

Vote Vulgar. To me had the better writting, a bit more open ende while ieing topic but I don't mind that.