pancakebruh - smooth. amazingly well written. seriously. best verse i've ever read by you. favorite part..
David doesn’t know gossamer from satin. Is gossamer satin?
Lost in the patterns. Aloft, drinking coffee with her is Latin. Innate.
Naked cross section of passion. Winterlove, winter in cabins. She’s late
absolutely remarkable piece, all in all. sounded so great. i just don't know where you went. have no clue.
he fired a pregnant secretary wot?
mr. j - i like this. off beat. good though. interested to hear how you may have delivered it. in my very humble and honest opinion, i percieve your piece to have started with a great story - and ended in a completely seperate self glorification piece. sounded good enough.
/v pancake - although j was almost on some epic other shit nobody can fuck with, he just stopped. abruptly. and cake won.
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