[PancakeBrah]

Frank:

Nice verse. Had all of the Frank trademarks, the rhymes and rhythm of the piece was particularly strong. Emotion was there as well, per usual. The crux of the piece seemed a bit rushed, but that effect can work. A bit more visceral at the expense of detail. Good verse.

Certain:

One of the best verses I've read from you. There was no twist; the twist came before the piece even started. You simply explored the emotional depth of both people involved with great insight. The wording, schemes, and rhythm were all top notch. The ending was subtle, understated, and powerful. Well done on all fronts.

Both verses were top notch but Certain's appealed to me more. Both were about even in terms of technical prowess.

v/Certain