Vulgar- This was a deep dish my friend. "I wanna solve the puzzle: A socially indifferent superhippy who prefers to be closer to the exaggerations of natures halucinogens and liquor finds himself in the presence of the blind everyday people who offend him with their existence?" Maybe? Ah well, I tried. I usually try to avoid reading you because it can get pretty trying to grasp the concepts you cook up. I greatly appreciate the mellow mind fuck that this gave me and I will go have a cigarette. Good Shit.
Diode- It seems like you got tired of playing games. I liked this, although that nursery rhyme-ass cadance pissed me off lol. It was cool that you held out for the shamalan twist(I love those) and though it wasn't a huge jolt, it left me with some level of entertainment value. I thought the mood manipulation throughout your piece was cool, managing a 'shoe's on the other foot' type premise to a 'usual suspects' type deal IMO. I think the presentation could have been filled with far better schemes, but it was overall enjoyable and appreciated. Good job bro.
I have a dilemma. I feel like I'm letting Vulgar down by not grasping the gravity of his piece, but at the same time, I feel like even if I completely caught it, it wouldn't top Diode's verse conceptually (to me). That said, I'll choose what I understood and enjoyed a little more because I'm a simpleton. MVGT Diode.
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