Frank- OMG you're really fucking with my head on this one. 95% of this resonated with me 110%. This shit hit hard and the progression of the story felt just like a fuckiong memory. You are by far the most natural storyteller I've ever read in textcee form, and this was a prime example. I know the presentation wasn't quite polished, but this was definitely polished enough to get the point, and all that emotion, across. I fucking loved this verse and the soul behind it. Good Shit Frankie.
Certain- Fuck. You really brought it. The complete environment. The fourth dimension. This was a complete and balanced experience, fully equipped with a professional nuance of delicate, yet powerful writing. The language was perfect, the mood and pacing in sync. This would give any storyteller a run for their money.
DAMN you guys. This was an immaculate battle. The second I've read and I think this is BOTW. Both top tier posts, although Frank didn't seem to have a perfect layout of his piece. Both of you guys shined very well through yor strengths with a high level of grace and poise. This is a very hard choice, but for me I'll abandon my bias of emotion since it's so present here. MVGT Certain for the better worded, and technically viable verse.
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