interesting battle.
zen
i thought you brought it this week. your rhyming is on point throught out this piece. very descriptive language ccreating some dope imagery
you reall erros that i can see really i mean if im being picky, i wish it woudl of been a bit longer. cuz what you had was riddle with depth lol
good angle on the topic..
frank.
getting past the repeating phrases. this was some reall cool shit man. can i tell you that eveyr line made me thing. like some made me sratch
my head a bit. but dude, this was some real deep shit man. the prospective i et from each individual line is dope foreal. i think you took this
topic and ran with out the fucking door man, ill shit yo.
overall
i thought franks piece was strong enough to get past the annoying god shit. cuz it was just well written with some real thought provking lines. zen had a dope
verse to and to be honest it could go either way zen though he wrote a short one i felt he had enough content to make this battle dope. i thought frank got this
tho. creative take on the topic.
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