geno
man. thats my first reaction right there. this was fucking dope dope dope man the story progressed so much nicely dude i mean
the progression was jut butter son. and the multis the easy floiw of your word choice was outstanding. the story..the story is waht
got me here. this was some deep shit, great imagery as well you capped it off with an even doper ending totally unexpected on my end
lol...what more can i say.
camp
you started this off doper than geno imho. i mean your language was very inviting, it felt like we where having this conversation and your telling
this tale lol...dope shit. your scheme was dope and you flowed smooth for the most part. the story though seemed to waver a bit from time to time
for lines up from "understanding this, its deep"...feels out of place from the beginning of your piece which was onpoint. the matrix line also felt out
of place. compared to the next 2 lines under the matrix line and the previous 2 lines..maybe im just being to picky.
overall
i think geno edged this with camps little bumps he had with his verse.. geno dropped a dam near flwaless story and execution of said story
camp didnt slouch either it was dope but compared to genos approach. i felt like his was a bit more concrete. dope battle fellas
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