stadilz, Frank? See u still handling business.
lol i don't know how to feel about this, tbh. In some cases, the wording seemed kind of forced - with the obvious purpose to carry that 'oy' rhyme scheme. ex:
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under the sequoia tree; furthest expression; from that of annoyed.
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or maybe i'm just reading it wrong. This may or may not be a flexercise judging by the train-of-thought'esque approach. Nonetheless, i still enjoyed it. To echo a previous poster's sentiment, i too felt this wasnt your strongest piece but there was still finger prints of obvious talent.