View Single Post
Old 03-01-2013, 09:33 PM   #11
Nigma
The COAT...
 
Nigma's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: BC, Canada
Posts: 1,723
Battle Record: 28-20


Champed
- Art of Writing League (x3)

Rep Power: 4595813
Nigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant futureNigma has a brilliant future
Default

Aes, you showed your potential in depth through what you said, however your rhymes were lacking complexity which took away from the read a bit. Aside from practicing, I'd recommend voting on as many battles as you have time for to help grasp the small things people do. This will also make you think critically and teach yourself what you like in others writing and hopefully have some of it rub off on you.

Vin, solid showing, didn't do anything exception conceptually but had an enjoyable rhyme scheme and painted some nice, vivid pictures.

The league appreciates two debuting writers showing up!
My vote goes to Vin
Nigma is offline