...a retard, how?
At least I bothered to read and respond unlike most of the forum.
I could have been more indepth, but I was on the move at the time, just wanted to acknowledge Frank that I was still among the few reading.
The lines in this ARE long to me, I wasn't being an asshole, take a look at that shit for yourselves:
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A fat pudgy character with a mellow soft face - comes closer – with a severing scar,
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...that's at least 22 syllables right there, it has to be, I haven't even counted but as someone who reacords - I keep my lines around 12-16 syllables. This couldn't be spat to a beat and flow unless Frank on his Twista shit, and lets be honest, he isn't. Neither is Geno. Gennie Weasley been on my dick ever since I called out his Harry Potter ass for being a wack faggot. Ain't nothing to see here. Frank is a good writer, the idea was cool, execution could have been... but some of them lines belong on Rap-Royalty somewhere or a gym, they're such a stretch. How you gonna have a line 20+ syllables long and only rhyme at the end of the line? It loses any semblance of flow, IN MY HONEST FUCKING OPINION.
I don't troll this side of the board, but I do keep it real. Call me what you like, but I'm my own man.
NYC taking sideswipes when he one of my biggest fans from his younger days. I see you, pussy. Always the contender, never the champ when it comes to these leagues gots to be tough, huh?
- 10x RSTL Champion