[Geno]

Hmm..

Frank. Loved your take man. Feel like you killed it tbh. You went way in depth and pretty much covered a lot of grounds here.

I didn't like the repetitive "god" @ the beginning of each line. It really rocked the boat for me and made it annoying to read after a while. Not to take away from the direction you went in.. cause it was hella creative and unexpected.

Zen.
Loved what you did here. The multis and vivid pictures of the creation of life. The destruction and rebirth almosgt of everything around. It was pretty dope. Short and sweet.

Typically I love franks approaches and takes on a topic. This week is no different, I just feel the constant 'god' and the monotonous tone of the whole thingg killed it for me this week.

Tough loss, and honestly an upset imo.
But I got
V-zenland