Aes.. can tell your new to this a bit.
Had some nice ideas formulating but I feel like your execution made it drag and still not connect very often. Mechanics are lacking heavy in your verse. But don't stray.. your in the right place and as the weeks go on you'll get better and better.
Vinzr.
You came in and pretty much proved to me tthat you've been writing for a while. Had a smooth verse and stayed on point. Did well with the topic and I'm now wondering where you came from.. alias I wonder?
V-vinz. Had the better all around verse
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