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Lars · 12-17-2013, 09:14 AM

pretty cool

some lines were stretched as fuck though to get to the odd rhymes at the end

its too convoluted in parts

needs more internals and what not to make it flow better

i dug it tho

12-17-2013, 09:14 AM	#7
Lars PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton Posts: 1,588 Battle Record: 5-0 Champed - The Winter Topical Rep Power: 1809298	pretty cool some lines were stretched as fuck though to get to the odd rhymes at the end its too convoluted in parts needs more internals and what not to make it flow better i dug it tho __________________ PROVEN BITER