Cot dayum good battle haha.
Innovator: I usually don't like the short bar style and but yours feels like a poem. The imagery that's in your piece is some of the best I've seen. The rhyme scheme was simple but the piece felt far from that. The storyline of your piece was good as well. You're definatly someone to look out for in the league.
Mike Wrecka: You went with the quote the way I would have gone with it and you executed it perfectly holmes. Nice piece of time slippin away from the pressures of life and I related with this piece because I think we all feel this daily lol.
There was two very different verses here. Inno went with an abstract take on the quote and Mike took a literal take on the quote. The abstract way is far more risky, but I think Inno took this one. Very good battle from you two. Props
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