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Old 12-15-2013, 02:29 AM   #11
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it was cool but you said an esophagus fondled wits which doesn't really make sense and if by roxy hits you mean inhaling drugs out a lightbulb or something how does that take a saunter? Are heroine hits about to start jogging next and coke lines will do sprints? lol a more coherent theme would help but if you're gonna always post with that vicious angry tone why not try some horrorcore stories?
"hockin spit til tonsils ripped, severed an esophagus" this was sposed to mean i was spitting, like rapping, rippin it if you will. "...just as it had fondled wits" and as i literally tore through my throat spititng so vicious, it began to get sick in a more intelligent way than just rapping

"dropout college kid who sauntered roxy stints" (stints, not hits). i worded it this way because i wasted a lot of my time and life, walking through the repetitive motions (sauntered) of looking for the next one as if it was my job (stints). if you really want me to break down every line i will. anyways, pretty sure it made sense but i can see your point about rushing for the next one rather than taking your time. and even though i'm sure you were being facetious, roxies are basically sythetized heroin. so as opposed to meth, you wouldnt be smoking them through fuckin lightbulbs like a crackhead. i knew some people who would actually smoke their roxies on tinfoil but that was a fuckin waste of time and money so anyone who actually did that was an idiot in my opinion. anything else i should break down?
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