I liked this. Definitely OM material, verses a back and forth in the cyphers. I think you should commit to this style in OM more often until you polish it. You could do some good with this. The first half was cool to me, then it dropped off into more of a loose ramble.
Like I said tho, cool piece. Not a common style of flow from what I've been reading. Cool shit.
__________________
Ahem.
|