Props on opening with a handful of words I've probably never read before and still facilitate flow to a degree where my ignorance in pronunciation did not take away from the smooth read. Captured my attention (and added a few words to my vocabularly) with that opener and lambasted some really nice images throughout. A short read with as much content per capita as Pandora's Box. Without going back for a second read, the tree dust line stuck with me. There were vivid images throughout but the buildup/placement of that one in particular worked very well for me. Overall impression, I probably took in about 80% of the content which gives this verse the wonders of re-readability. I like how it forces the reader to physically look up words to enjoy it to its potential. Even in doing so, it provides a certain mysterious allure. Well done with this one
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