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Originally Posted by Certain
I sometimes call my co-moderator of the Art of Writing League "Mike Wrecker."
Then I giggle.
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the concept was solid, but wording was slightly off putting. The initial information was disposable, and didnt help in expanding on or lulzifying your concept. The final line is effective in parodying and undermining the social apprehension that your concept is inspired by. It is also representative of your character in a way. good artistic touch.
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