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I read the feed given to see if there was anything to add. I agree with Vulgar was saying, the only difference is that I kinda like the preaching-aspect of it. Makes it more personal to me as you're the one saying it, not just something to ponder upon, this is how you see it. No-one else.

That said this piece had a lot of interesting things to say. I enjoyed this line as well:

''Mind blown: How to remain pure when these are those who govern how u manage?''
^ Nice!

''And they turn you into a murderer as soon as you claim prospect
They chasing the end game and so are you, but it ain’t the same object
Their tongues become guns, cuz they lack the sums to fund a sane conflict
So people become pawns, lying to themselves and seeking to blame honest''
^ Word!

Overall I enjoyed this, but some polishing on the stuff Vulgar pointed out would make this A LOT better. Keep it up V!