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Old 12-12-2013, 09:33 AM   #3
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This was dope. Enjoyed the poem from start to finnish.

Don't know if I understood it completely, but this seems to me that you're speaking of a relationship that isn't exactly serious from your part, but it is from her. However, it seems to be developing either way as you've already reached the stage where it gets serious and you haven't reached that point yet. Truly a poem that shows the differences in emotions in the start of a relationship, or the feelings that surround a relationship of the kind you're talking about in the poem.

Enjoyed it. If you plan to write more poems I'm definitely looking forward to them. Well done.
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