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@Vulgar: Word. I actually usually pay notice to these sort of things, but I completely disregarded it in this case. And for that I take full responsibility when it comes to repetition of words. It's kinda extremely basic so I realize I failed quite a bit on this text. Going to feed a few drops and post something soon I would appreciate a lot if you took a look at.

Your words definitely helped, I read your feed when you first posted it but I haven't replied until I now. I obviously needed a repetition of this kind of kind of feedback and have paid closer attention to it now which hopefully shows in the piece I'm about to drop. Thanks a lot for the thorough feedback!

And thanks to all for checking it out and leaving some words.