Breathless Verse was a little winded. Sometimes less is more. When you spend an entire 7 days writing a rhyme it becomes a diary. Your submission lacked the gusto to back up the hype surrounding your discussion thread press conference. Nycspitz, a lot of ill words. A few I have never ever read before.I swear if I read your pieces with a dictionary I'd be a few degrees more ostcivalatist. I liked this flow you had going though son that shit was ill dawg. I mean shit nininja was contumacious and a acolyte but then he would just be skating with the puck on some Aryan, authoritarian, vegetarian, Samaritan shit.
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