Certain pretty much nailed the breakdown, so I'll forego the complexities
YDK - real nice piece, although quite standard, I think if you'd have not kept the therapist twist until the end this may have been a little bit better, this read very much like an audio piece for me, and I loved that aspect, but overall it was fairly basic
Cake - you command of language is over the top, although it was vocab laden it was pretentious. The only complaint (slight at that) is that there wasn't enough filler to make it sound like things a person would normally say. Everything else was spot on, you fit a ridiculous amount into so few bars, Shit was intense man
Vote - Cake
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