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Old 12-11-2013, 08:26 PM   #17
King Karaoke
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Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,515
Battle Record: 61-20

Accomplishments
- 50 Wins

Champed
- Survivor Tournament
- Netcees Battle League (6x)
- Netcees Gimmick Tournament

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Hi...

Clown then beat you, rock solid? your undoubtedly see-through,
If you’re the Apex, then I guess I’m the mountain beneath you.
Stop stating you smoke dro, fake shit and I’m calling you stale kid,
You wouldn’t know dopeness, unless you asked the board like Mael did.*
No one believes your gayness, I'm more evolved at text n spitting ink,
And the only people who care 'bout Ape X...keep asking for the Missing Link.

I quoted the first line because I really don't get it...
I loved the wording but wtf does that mean?...
The Mael line was nice I was thinking about using a similar line but forgot about it...
U don't have to explain the lines or add a link to someone else's thread...
Ape line was cool but wording made it come off forced...

Me n ya girl stay makin movies, she want them hrly flix
Came found me cuz every other movie Plots climaxed in 5 mins
Get her, she reached her limit n pass her off with no gimmick
Shit she only bangbros now, 2 find her he put a .com at the end of it

The opner is way too obvious to use against him but it wasn't a bad line...
I liked the bangbros line but it lacked sting...
Rest of your verse was too weak...

Plot got this with more creativity...
Vote- Plot...

Bye...
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