Cym: The opener was very weak in my opinion and what followed was more of the same from that point on. Better wording and they would have hit harder. The best part of this was it was all directed at phuck instead of generic punch lines.
Phuck: Wasn't feeling too much of this to be honest. I enjoyed your verse against lotto but not too much here. There were some creative ideas here, but your wording was a little off as well. Still, I think you did enough for the W.
V/Phuck
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