Incomplete English when it comes to rhyming hurts you a lot of the time, Veritas. Eloquence is on the forecast but you're not consistently raining on them hoes yet, so to speak. lol. A few degrees north and I'm confident you'll be there. For example, 'caustic' and 'blame honest' are mismatches.
For every master mind scheme that works out, ten fail and cause irreversible damage
Mind blown: How to remain pure when these are those who govern how u manage?
^Scary thoughts though, eh?
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I think if you wrote in a philosophic way vs. a firm believer lecturing it would be more effective - meaning, as the writer, remain neutral, but through your elaborative statements, completely drive your point home. I find myself reading your work and hearing a stern, determined, directive narrator's voice, and this doesn't cut it entirely for me. @
The Mind Assassin
Keep doing you