Fire. Once I began, I read this at a very fast pace and it worked well. Explosive and flexible rhyme schemes careened this one from beginning to end. It kind of reminded me of an Eminem flow experiment, then you mentioned him at the end so it was a semi-confirmation that his exploits inspired yours.
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Sodomy, or possibly a love interest on the Internet. Ain't even had dinner yet, but it's a winner, bet. Deliver the check. I get her back to the room and fuck her ass. No lube. Sinner, yes. Hit her chest with my dick, spit, and left.
Shit.
This kids a mess.
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lmao
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Hollow entry. Fuck it, my bottles empty. I'm hollering, "Hit me!" Bothered and tipsy with a collar and fifteen dollars to get me a scholar to sit with me and toler - ate me and listen to my problems and not just positively hate me.
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The fifteen dollars part had a bananas flow to it.
Keep doing you