Hah, this was good to me. Flawed in some ways yet full of personal touch. It reminded me of something I'd be reading in 2005 on Rapflava back in the day.
I wake up in my boxers with jizz, it isn't a shocker, it is
the lonely and jerked urban version of a personal diss,
I'm not only hurt - turban-wearing murderers aint shit, I'm not a person you fix;
I'm the mixed version of Kurt Cobain with bits of Durden, bourbon and Kiss.
^'I'm not a person you fix' has an undeniable musical quality to it that I would probably say made the piece authentic.
Keep doing you
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