I still dislike the structure...but I'm not seeing a whole lot of people complain about it..
So whatever works I guess.
However this was dope excluding the criticism of structure.
Far too short of a piece for how dope this was. I wanted to read more.
Zen
I think you did just as good as geno tbh. I'm not seeing a display of anyone really besting anyone here.
If anything it just meshed seamlessly. Id suggest re doing this and elaborating.
Geno
If you're name would not have been displayed I wouldn't have known out the gate it was you writing this. This (Imo) seems different for you. It shows you can be versatile and switch up styles.
Nice scheming. Nice flow. Keep scribing
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