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Old 12-05-2013, 06:14 PM   #14
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This was well written and had good structure and flow

"In his seat, speaking with a Doc, his topics field logistics
Says there's harpies in the heart of me, we seek then to reveal the bitches"

I liked how you used the real meaning of the word harpy
"that which snatches" or "to snatch"
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