I mean, it was OK. ill nik-A is better than this or most of his verses in this format would indicate. The tightly compacted but simple rhymes coupled with awkward syllable stressing made it really choppy. The content was standard issue. But it obviously was a test piece, and I can appreciate that.
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I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.
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