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Old 12-03-2013, 12:26 AM   #10
Vulgar
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Wasn't really satisfied with both verses, tbh. Dam, you went with a regular type of verse. It was meaningful and had characters with intentions, but it just felt average and a little hollow. Diode, yours was okay, but too short fused for me to take seriously. I look for quality over quantity so it's not an issue with that, I just wasn't feeling this.
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